Someone Is Always Watching by Kelley Armstrong

Reviewed by Phoebe N.
Grade 11

In Someone is Always Watching, by Kelley Armstrong; Blythe, Gabrielle, Tanya and Tucker have always been in a tight-knitted friend group, living an ordinary life. Things started getting disturbing and unpleasant when flashbacks and nightmares started to appear more frequently. It escalated rapidly when Gabrielle was found covered in blood next to their dead principal, unable to recall what happened. Crevices full of secrets and memories unravel between their friendships that eventually threatens their trust, relationship, and lives. “How can Blythe and her friends trust each other when they can’t even trust their own memories?”

The plot and storyline of this book are quite intriguing although in some scenes, it does get tacky and a bit corny, especially the characters’ thoughts. The prologue starts off with a memory of the first time Blythe met Tucker, introducing the good girl and bad guy trope and highlighting a sense of temptation even within those who are exceptionally fastidious and always abide by rules.

Chapter one begins with Blythe noticing something was off with Gabrielle; it wasn't until her big breakdowns around security cameras that eventually became alarming to everyone else. Repeatedly, Gabrielle would yell and scream at the school's security cameras while trying to dismantle them with inevitable aggression. “They’re always watching,” she would choke out. All the while, Blythe was receiving emails outside of the school’s server under the alias Veritas, Latin for truth, detailing a case linked to an eight-year-old boy committing a murder on his little sister’s tutor.

Slowly over the course of this book, many other characters within the friend group start reliving their memories and discovering the real truth about their school, and even themselves. Old and new relationships are formed, filled with action and romance.

The book includes perspectives from different characters involved, but mostly from Blythe’s point of view. From my experience, Blythe’s chapters and POVs were much more enjoyable compared to others because they seemed more rushed, whereas Blythe’s perspectives were more in depth.

TRIGGER WARNING: There are mentions of childhood traumas, child neglect, abuse, sexual harassment, murder and suicide. Please be aware if those topics trigger sensitivity or discomfort.

Some chapters end ominously, which could lead to confusion considering the switch in perspective and having two different events happening at once but at different locations. The pace of this book in the first 150 pages is quite a slow burn but the last 150 pages were eventful and full of surprises, picking up the pace.

Emotionally, this book was very descriptive, emphasizing the importance of friendship which sometimes overpowered family relations. I genuinely enjoyed it as a quick pick-me-up book for the summer. On the contrary, the last few chapters were a bit disappointing because plot twists and surprises were already revealed several chapters back. This leads to repetition of revealed secrets, making it less exciting and more of an annoyance.

Someone is Always Watching is an easy young adult fiction novel, with not much physical violence but more emotional distress. Kelley Armstrong did a good job regarding the prologue and being able to hook the readers but some of the corny and tacky writing could minimize to appeal more to an older audience. However, if you’re into mystery novels that are on the less violent spectrum, this novel may be for you. There is a hint of romance that lingers within most of the book but doesn’t get explored until towards the end. Those who enjoy One of Us Is Lying and A Good Girl’s Guide to Murder should give this one a try.