Counting Down With You by Tashie Bhuiyan

Reviewed by Lauren M.
Grade 11

In Tashie Bhuiyan’s upcoming novel Counting Down with You (to be released in May 2021), a teenage girl battles anxiety and severe familial expectations. Although the story itself was interesting and the plot had potential, I found it to be incohesive and simply too long.

Karina Ahmed is a sixteen year old Bangladeshi-Muslim American who is gravely afraid of disappointing her parents. Although she is proud to be a Muslim and embraces it, she believes her family is too conservative. When her parents fly to Bangladesh for a month, she is afforded a bit of freedom. But when she is roped into tutoring Ace Clyde (a boy with a questionable reputation), she begins to wonder if she is crossing too many lines--especially when they start pretending to date. But as she counts down the days until her parents’ return, a new thought grows more powerful in her heart: What does she want? Dare she even fight for it?

The story was interesting--it provided a chance to peek into a world and culture not portrayed in mainstream media. Likewise the plot held just enough to interest, but unfortunately, that flicker was all there was to it. Bhuiyan is a great writer, but she had Karina’s thoughts flying in all directions.

Chunks of text could have been cut out, and it would still be cohesive--more so, even. However, the biggest issue was neither the story nor the plot but the characters, specifically Karina. I appreciated the diversity, but I found myself disliking her--she seemed very rigid and even mean at times, especially to people who only showed her kindness, like Ace. While I understand that her family was extremely burdensome and her anxiety amplified her problems, that does not excuse much of her behavior. She often complained, told people they did not understand, and then had to be forced to communicate her grievances in a way that inspired change. Another thing I did not appreciate was the way her anxiety was written; it was not painted in a very educational or hopeful light and was not true to reality in many ways.

While promising, Counting Down with You disappointed me. It simply lacked the character development and action it needed. I would rate this as a two out of five stars.